Sales Poem

So I had to write a poem for my Literature class, and decided to write it on my favorite subject, SALES!  Would love some feedback and comments on the poem.

My Life, My Sale

By: Michael C. McMillan

A name and number is where it starts

Five minutes of attention is all I want

For six long months I call without losing heart

I wonder what skills you need me to flaunt?

Finally I reach you, and you are interested in what I have to sell

All my work seems to have paid off, if I can just make this sale

Then right as I feel you are one of my newest clientele

 You let me know senior leadership may have to bail…

So as quick as I can I get to the airport

Contract in hand, I will not let this deal fail

Yes, I know how to make sure to win this sport

I hope your team is ready, because I am ready to land this whale!

            A last minute meeting with your entire team

            Then out with a signed contract and the fulfillment of my dream!